My Life In Your Hands by Atta

My Life In Your Hands by Atta
Submitted June 3, 2011

I feel you…
even if you are far away.
I want you…
even knowing I can´t have you.
I wish I could cherish you…
I wanted to feel your heat…
hear your words full of affection
I wanted to smile just seeing you
A huge emptiness came inside of me
I wanted the wind to blow in your being
and would make you remember one day
and in any place
Someone loved you
In the shape that could be capable, like the most simple flower
I wanted you to remember inside your heart the affection that existed in that love
that he would warm up your heart in the moments that you would feel lonely
that would make you remember me
I search you and I can´t see it now
it´s late, the breaking of the dawn
I tried how to forget you
Sorry but my heart doesn´t understand that word
You´re my soul, my reason
I feel lost in this emptiness
because even without knowing you made me be my Life…
Passion reason…
it´s a contained pain
like I wanted…
that would cure this wound, that tears and hurts the soul
that, as little bits, brings me the smell of death
because living was having you
and today I´m alone in a solitude corner
and this empty soul is waiting for your compassion
Loving act?
No
A life in your hands…

  1. June 6th, 2011 at 11:25 | #1

    well done like it nice

  2. Atta Atta
    June 6th, 2011 at 16:46 | #2

    thanks paul :)

  3. cassie
    June 6th, 2011 at 18:21 | #3

    omg buddy i actually love this poem really felt what you wrote love ya bud

  4. Atta Atta
    June 6th, 2011 at 19:40 | #4

    thanks bud, that means a lot to me :)

  5. Frank Brandao
    July 2nd, 2011 at 00:25 | #5

    Atta WHO? Ur not a poet and everyone knows it. Ur so boring I read your poem and started snoring. Are you dyke cause your poem sucks. LUV U FOXY LUV FB

  6. Atta Atta
    July 6th, 2011 at 23:44 | #6

    loool, ok. If that’s your opinion, I’ll just have to respect it, i guess I can’t please everyone and everyone don’t like the same so it’s alright, but I just do this for fun though, I don’t take the poetry that seriously

  7. newmeganfoxfan
    July 13th, 2011 at 03:40 | #7

    keep up the good work atta and just ignore that asshole.

    i enjoy reading your poems

    hope to read one soon :D

  8. Atta Atta
    July 21st, 2011 at 23:00 | #8

    thanks man :) I’ll try and work on something new ;)